The Way I Am, I Can't Express Or Understand. - Comments

  • Reanimate

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    *such
    dfghdflgkf
    June 19th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • Reanimate

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    Poodle, huh?
    Explain that one. ahah

    Kennedy's suck a tease :)
    June 19th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • tyrannosarahrex

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    oh my gosh. I'm in love with this story. it's amazing! lol :)
    I will definitely explode if you don't update soon! it's so good!!!
    June 19th, 2010 at 06:12am
  • precursors

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    Kennedy needs to stop being a douche. Seriously.
    I like the length of the chapters too :)

    Luhrve it <3
    June 19th, 2010 at 02:25am
  • hoosier.

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    Oh, Kennedy. :3
    more soon please?
    June 19th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • hoosier.

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    I think the length of your stories is perfect, it's just the way you write. <3
    June 17th, 2010 at 03:52am
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    If you cut the length of the chapters in half, I think it would help your story a lot more.
    I mean, this is just me and you are totally in control of being able to ignore this, but the length is so long of your chapters, it makes me lose focus. Like, this story is amazingly well written and you obviously have a knack for getting people interested, but if you cut down the length, I think it would help readers appreciate that you're taking the time to update (like you normally do) but it's about whether you're just having long chapters to make the story seem lengthy or having them because there's actual vital information. I love the plot, love the characters, love the writing. Also, cutting the chapters in half will not hurt the length of the story itself. Unlimited chapters, what what.
    Anyways, ignore the rant or not, but continue updating?
    June 17th, 2010 at 03:43am
  • hoosier.

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    Great chapter.
    I approve.
    I want more like...now. (:
    June 13th, 2010 at 10:47pm
  • precursors

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    Ah, Landon sounds like me on a roller coaster. I hate them. >.>

    When you update again, I'll be sure to read them, but I'm at the beach so it might be later :\
    (but still update!)

    Cameo... that'd be cool. Dunno the deats, but I'm sure we'll figure something out, haha :)
    June 13th, 2010 at 01:10am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Awhhh, I feel so bad for Kenny<3
    xD
    Haha.
    S'not like he knew it was gunna happen.
    But whatever.
    AND,
    say, Kennedy was being an asshole for not saying anything when Landon when home.
    >.<
    Update soon<3
    xo
    June 12th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • sarahface.

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    i'm ready to see how this goes beebee. this chapter was great.
    can't wait to do what i do best ;]
    June 12th, 2010 at 08:20pm
  • Reanimate

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    I'm going to start commenting on your actual stories...hmm.

    ...but I already told you what I thought about the first chapter D:

    How about next update? Sounds good to mehh :))
    June 8th, 2010 at 05:40pm
  • sunny.

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    sunny loves this story so far. <33
    it seems really interesting with landon's problems and all. ;0
    more soon, please? <33
    June 7th, 2010 at 02:23am
  • hoosier.

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    Excited for the rest of this shit. <3
    My Justin Beiber has mad writing skills(:
    Oh, I finished before I left for prom just forgot to comment.
    June 6th, 2010 at 05:46pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    -Gurgles-
    I love Kenny.
    <3
    June 5th, 2010 at 10:33pm
  • sarahface.

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    I can't wait to see how this turns out beebee :3
    June 5th, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • precursors

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    COMMENT VIRGINITY. <3

    I feel really bad for Landon. Poor guy has a hard time :(

    I can't wait to see how this unfolds <3
    June 5th, 2010 at 09:14pm