If you cut the length of the chapters in half, I think it would help your story a lot more. I mean, this is just me and you are totally in control of being able to ignore this, but the length is so long of your chapters, it makes me lose focus. Like, this story is amazingly well written and you obviously have a knack for getting people interested, but if you cut down the length, I think it would help readers appreciate that you're taking the time to update (like you normally do) but it's about whether you're just having long chapters to make the story seem lengthy or having them because there's actual vital information. I love the plot, love the characters, love the writing. Also, cutting the chapters in half will not hurt the length of the story itself. Unlimited chapters, what what. Anyways, ignore the rant or not, but continue updating?
Awhhh, I feel so bad for Kenny<3 xD Haha. S'not like he knew it was gunna happen. But whatever. AND, say, Kennedy was being an asshole for not saying anything when Landon when home. >.< Update soon<3 xo
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