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  • chewing on tinfoil

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    Sorry for not commenting >.<
    I havent had internet. -.-

    buttttt, i loved this chapter! Gabe and Bilvy Crack me up x}

    i loved the whole argument. and i'm about to do it again!
    hehe. ^love Gabe. those two are the perfect couple. :}

    ILY please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 28th, 2010 at 05:06am
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Ha ha. "AND I'M ABOUT TO AGAIN!!!" Honestly didn't expect that.
    And I can't get mad at you. School is killing me. I'm usually a straight A student but I've failed me last three tests.
    September 25th, 2010 at 06:25am
  • christmas lights

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    i love this story! there's so much genuine love in it! for 2 people in an insane assylum (i know that's not exactly what it is but wateva) they really are like sane people. though i don't think anyone in the world is 100% sane. and that's just the way i like it. 'caus it would be really boring if everyone in the world was sane and boring. that would be like, you go into class, and everyones silet as the teacher speaks. everyone pays attention and nothing bad happens. in the playground, no ones running around screaming. no one's making up wierd stories involving two gay guys that others can't get enough of. your stories turn me to goo. :) and that's just the way i like it.
    July 26th, 2010 at 12:47pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Thank you for updating! I love this story!
    July 21st, 2010 at 12:51am
  • Panic! At The Disco.

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    A-fucking-dorable.
    :D
    I love the love.
    ^-^
    Update this soon.
    :D
    July 20th, 2010 at 09:42pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    I just read the whole story again because I like it that much so update soon!
    July 20th, 2010 at 05:12pm
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    O.O
    wow... I absolutly loved the Gabilliam bit. That was pretty freaking hot, I gotta say.
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
    July 12th, 2010 at 10:31pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    YAY!!!
    July 12th, 2010 at 06:59pm
  • christmas lights

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    GABILLIAM!!!!!!!! WOOOT!! sorry, just i've ben really getting into gabilliam recently. love this story, update soon!
    July 12th, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Awww. Poor Ryan. I don't blame him.
    Yay! Brendon is falling in love!
    July 9th, 2010 at 01:47am
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    AWWWWWWWWW
    This was an amazing chapter!! The beginning was adorable, and so was the end. (even I it was a little sad)
    So much love!!
    Hehe. Update soon. :)
    July 8th, 2010 at 01:26am
  • christmas lights

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    poor ryan. why is it that ryan ALWAYS gets beat up by his father? why are there never stories were ryan and his dad get along (long ones i mean)
    anyway. i really love this, update soon!
    July 7th, 2010 at 10:48pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Update soon! and i think you should include a little bit more of gabe and william. they crack me up!
    July 7th, 2010 at 06:33pm
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    URGH! Is anyone elses subs messed up? I mean seriously, I haven't gotten any email updates for like a week, s I decided to check my subs and there's like a million that read "inactive"

    Anyway; WHAT IS RYAN HIDING?!? I must know!! Please update soon. :3
    July 7th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • christmas lights

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    arg! >.< I need to know ryan's story! update soon!
    July 6th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • christmas lights

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    I am in love with this sentence:
    "The only thing is, I can’t live it alone. So will he live my life with me?"
    So freaking sweet. I really love how you describe Brendon's point of view. No one else could acomplish it :)
    I also love how they lean towards each other, and how Brendon wouldn't mind being Ryan's boyfriend.
    Love, love this story, update soon!
    June 28th, 2010 at 09:27pm
  • Radar Detector.

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    Okay that was incredibly cute. I love how tolerant Ryan is of Brendon, it's so sweet.
    June 28th, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • christmas lights

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    i really love this story! it's so amazing and the characters are brilliant!
    so please update once you get back!
    June 25th, 2010 at 09:45am
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    AWWWWWWWWW that was so adorable! Hehe I love this story.

    No updates until next week? :((( Oh well. I'll look forward to super long chapterrrr haha.

    UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!(whenyougetback)
    June 24th, 2010 at 11:08pm
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    Hahahahaha. "Speak English you fucking immigrant!" I love Will.
    I also loved the litle peterick thing you got going there. xD
    It took me a while to figure out why Pete was calling him trick. Hahahahaha.
    Anyways, please update soon!!!
    June 23rd, 2010 at 11:40pm