Hanru Sazuki - Comments

Anytime (: I'll let you know about the later chapters once I'm finished reading.

@ Hina's Prince Trunks
I will definitely work on this when I get the chance. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.

@ Tipsy Returns
Thank you. That means a lot that you like it. Thanks.

I tried reading this but the brightness of the text hurts my eyes and the missing images for the background seem to be distracting. Maybe center the contents box and replace the pictures. Definitely darken the text a little bit. Other than that this is a great start. :)

Such a unique style of writing. Definitely subscribing <3 It's great (though I'm only about to finish chapter 1) haha

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
No it's not complete yet. I'm still working on the third volume.

Is this complete? I'm wondering.

You weren't kidding when you said your chapters are long! Haha, I don't mind long chapters myself, but some people would see that and not wanna finish. I'd probably recommend parting it out and making them into separate chapters and split them on the really suspenseful parts that would normally be in the middle. I do that with mine as well, 3 parts for each chapter. I do really like Hanru though, and Leo for that matter. Out of all of the characters I thought those two had the best personalities. Though, Justin did remind me of Justin from soul eater because of the headphones haha. All in all it's definitely interesting, suspense mysteries are a lot of fun to read if written well. And I think you've done that. Keep it up!

i like the way this is written, it's pretty cool =D