Erised - Comments

Can you make this into an actual story?! It would be brilliant! cx

Dude you should continue this! its awesome so far!

This is epic. I would love it if you made a whole story out of it.

I LOVED it!
After reading it I actually really can see how they would go well together.
I like your writing style a lot, you word everything so well.
The only problem is it left me wanting more lol, so I for one definately think you should continue it.

You know when I saw Luna and TOM! I was like Tom? What the hell? But because I love Luna so much I was like alright I'll bite...but that was really good it really threw me off cause I was expecting it to be bad because of the fact that Luna really isnt that significant of a character but it was REALLY good!

Lea, I've gotta tell you...

This was freakin' awesome. It really was.

The pairing was wayy unexpected, but worked in some weird way. Probably because they counter balance one another in such a fantastic way.

And you totally got the creeper vibe that I'm sure the ever so charming Tom Riddle had, that other, less paranoid individuals than myself didn't get. Lol.

And the end was just freakin' epic, fer seriousness. Especially with that last line. I won't lie...

I was totally like 'Get off her ya creep'.

Not that anyone can blame me, Luna's one of my favorite (if not my all out) characters from the series and he's fuckin' Voldemort.

But yeahh.

It was amazingg.

As your stuff usually is, which is prolly why I love it so.

*Nods*

<333

Holy crap! This is amazing. At first I was like 'Luna and Tom! What...' But then I could sorta see it. There's a huge contrast between those two characters and you know what they say, 'opposites attract.' Ha... Anyway, I really like this. You're an amazing writer with a great detail of description. :D

Wow. I honestly wasnt expecting that, even after you told me bits.
Thats was good Lea :D