I nearly cried with the scenes with Marissa and Vincent. Frank, I like how he claims Marissa is his. Really awesome story, I hope you keep up the good work~
O.O, *tear* She doesn't deserve that shit. What is their problem? Grrrr, I hate abusers. I hope everything will work out and no one gets hurt. This is a really good story, really well written. Keep it up
woah, so when I got the emil saying it had been updated I was ecstatic. And if my new phone hadn't arrived in the post that day, this would have definitely have made my day :) please update soon!
I was intrigued from start to finish. You have a real gift for writing; not everyone could write a story and have somebody so amazed with every chapter. This was too good.
I'm so worried about Marissa. She needs to get out while she can...Oh, gosh; this is so good! Please update soon! I desperately want everything to be okay...
Please update soon, I really need to know what'll happen between Frank and Marissa. What will Frank do when he learns about Vincent? What will Vincent do when he learns about Frank?
Plus the mom remind's me of Zoey Redbird's mom, if you read the House of Night novels. Hopefully she does stay like that.