It's Raining in Phoenix - Comments

Update soon pleas I love this story. I hope Declan isnt going to do anything rash.

HEY. GUESS WHAT?! HE SHOULD FOLLOW THE D*UCHEBAG THATS ABUSING/RAPING HIS SISTER, THATS WHAT. Or I'll be really really sad :( AAAHHH I HATE DECLAN. DECLAN SHOULD BE SHOT IN THE HEAD AND THEN FED TO SICK LLAMAS. Whoa I'm getting too emotionally attached to this story O.O

do it.
he needs to follow her:D

thats so funny kathys all like "you suck at this game." lol that made me laugh soo hard! lol cant wait for more please update soon! o.O

this is kinda similiar to degrassi where fiona kisses her brothe r declan-she gets help then gets an abusive boyfriend-but your storys different0 i like it and im subscribed keep at it

update!

I loved It's Snowing in California...update soon. cant wait.

Omg please update soon. I wanna know what's gonna happen next. Can't wait XD

:P
I hate that kid. I reallllyy do.

She is totally only with him for appearances. So the parents will think she's over her bro. Either that or the parents made her see someone.

Declan is such a d**che. I think he really is going to get his ass kicked soon. He makes her get him food? What is she, his slave? lol I hate this kid!

i have an feeling that he's abusive!

I think Declean is an ass and just plain disgusting. A girl is not an object you can show off to your friends, it's just not right. And he should just ask her. I can't wait 'til you update. : )

Omg! So I'm guessing he abuses her?!?!

Update faster!!!

Haha. Sorry about the writers block.

omg! ah! i think jessie was afraid that rick got a girlfriend while he was gone, so she wanted to look like she was doing fine without him; so she got declan. just my prediction!!
UPDATE! :D

I cant wait until you post another chapter XD
And I gotta say my heart dropped when I read that Jessie got a boyfriend but then I read chapter two and was all happy and excited lmao =D

Aha! It's a cover up!

D: I love this.
Yet, it's so sad D:

Aw, thats sad.

oh snap.

AHHHH OMG OMG SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UGHH I HOPE SHE'S JUST PRETENDING SHE DOESNT LOVE HIM NO MORE!!!