I think that something should happed between haley and this creepy guy then brandon gets jealous or something. Well thats just what i think anyways. keep it coming your doing great!!!
I actually can relate to all of this. The percussion section? In it? Joining Marching Band? Done. Freshman? At one point, yes. In love with a senior? Done that. Broke my heart.....My life is a complete twin to this story.
I really like the story. I'm excited to find out why he's so into her and what's going to happen in the next chapter. Please write more. I just can't get enough