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  • Taste The Rainbow

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    The the story ^_^
    July 30th, 2011 at 01:12am
  • Writing is my Life

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    be shot? rlly? naaaa, i love ur story, plz continue!!!
    April 21st, 2011 at 06:29pm
  • Writing is my Life

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    nice!
    April 21st, 2011 at 06:20pm
  • Writing is my Life

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    scary, i must say and creepy
    April 21st, 2011 at 06:14pm
  • Writing is my Life

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    Very terrific!!! Keep it up girlie!!
    April 21st, 2011 at 06:11pm
  • Thelovelostbecka

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    i like it....
    check out one of ma stories plz. and leave a comment. plz. :D
    July 19th, 2010 at 12:24am
  • Yaha Mataru Hetsanai

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    This is really good, actually, its great! Keep it up!
    July 2nd, 2010 at 08:19am
  • Loveless!

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    what!!!
    keep writing soon update soon
    i'll die if you don't update!!!!!
    it's exciting!!!!
    June 22nd, 2010 at 06:02pm
  • darkqueen97

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    Fan-freakin-tastic!
    June 20th, 2010 at 02:03am
  • TooLateTheHero

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    ahh I like this =] ready for more!
    June 18th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • so.much.love

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    i love the way this is written. i really wish i could write stories like you do. i'm just stuck with poems for now. :/

    please update!!!!!
    pretty please! :)
    June 18th, 2010 at 02:09am
  • TheKelsie

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    I love it! You should write more! Not even kidding! And I love the stressed out words. It adds a lot of cool affect to it! ^_^

    -Panda/Muffin/Kelso
    June 17th, 2010 at 10:07am
  • darkqueen97

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    This was fantastic!
    I really enjoyed reading it!
    Man, your better then i am...just like everybody else is too
    June 17th, 2010 at 02:33am
  • Doubtful

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    I love your story.
    You have some wild imagination.
    Keep up the good work. :)
    June 17th, 2010 at 02:28am
  • Yaha Mataru Hetsanai

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    Wow, I'm new here on Mibba and your story was the first I've read. It was amzeing and I apsolutely loved it. I wonder what she is and what the man wants from her in a couple of days. Its truely going to be a delite to read on and see what happens, so I hope you update soon!

    From: Yaha Mataru Hetsanai
    June 17th, 2010 at 12:36am
  • anapilar94

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    Please write moree! this story is awesome and you are so creative and talented!! I love it!
    June 16th, 2010 at 11:11pm
  • Yeah_Its_Me

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    Okay I read your story like you asked me too and I loved it. Please write more!!
    June 16th, 2010 at 08:45pm
  • Valeska Moon

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    awesome!!!
    June 16th, 2010 at 06:16pm
  • kylekleptomania

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    extremely well written c: the plot seems very promising and i like what you've done so far and managed to end many of the chapters in small little cliffhangers c:

    what i would have to say that i don't like is that your chapters are far too short (and this is just a complaint cause I WANT MORE D:). i like long chapters, but then again, short chapters = quicker updates so i guess it's a double edged sword 8D secondly, i'd try to organize the paragraphs a bit better - try having actions go with dialogue, instead of having one character speak and then have the other character act in the same paragraph. c: other than that, it's really good so far and i can't wait for the next chapter ^.^
    June 16th, 2010 at 05:49pm
  • eatyourheartout

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    I feel like I'm at the manor ; I love your description... Keep it up :D
    June 16th, 2010 at 05:58am
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