Vous-voulez coucher avec moi. - Comments

I love it!(:

Love it! <3
Sorry about your family loss Dx

Definitely super-sexual relationsip for the two of them.

smex pleeeeez :) hahaha
a relation ship would be really cool. getting in depth into the characters and all that
you would want to add a little substance to keep it going for a good length of time :)
loves it

Well You can always try Mibba's spell check, or a beta, or just read through it. Well I kinda wanted her to go back to Helene, but they should defentiely have sex. Whatever you decide will be fine :) Sorry for your lost.

This is cool. I like it.

Update please(:

I hate when Mibba does that, I feel for you :(

Ah sorry, just noticed the little side note in the description. Sorry, I understand now :)

I do like this, it's good. However, your title doesn't make sence, to say "would you like to sleep with me?" is "Voulez-vous coucher avec moi?" in french. Sorry to point it out and sorry if I'm wrong. Good story though.

I agree with sherba, but I also hope you continue really fast because this is very sexy :)

So. I kinda like your plot line, but your spelling and grammar needs some work. I'd suggest going over it or getting a beta to look over your stuff and change what needs to be changed. The line that comes to mind is "She whore a typical clubbing dress, and heals that where probably killing her. We where having a blast". Also, I agree with HippieDays as well, some points in this story are offensive as well. I think you have a good idea but you need more work on getting to the top.

Nice writing :) very detailed.

I really like it you should continue

First, she has a style and opinion that happens to be quite original, and not retarded like most celebrities.

That's very ignorant and offensive. I advise you edit it before being reported.

I need the next chapter!

I really like this! So, you should continue. Maybe try to improve grammar a bit? just a thought :]

I love it! You rreally have a great story going. Keep it up!!

i love japan im really into anime and asian porn

yay i like it:D

<3Amanda