Amongst the Waves - Comments

Hey, just wanted to let you know that so far I really do enjoy this story. Hoping for more soon :)

Is Stuart going to have sex with Simon? I want more.

Hi! I read it! And, I really liked it! It's has a different format, but I love it! :)
Great choice of words and your detail is very good.
Keep updating :)

As requested here i am, and i read your story.
Your plot is very unique, i like the idea of it all. The way you deliver you plot is amazing aswell. Beautiful choice of words, well thought out.
I like it. I subbed.

I really do love this story :). Your choice of words are amazing! I subscribed. ♥

Okay. . . I'm not good with writing comments lol... um, anyway!!! I love it so far, the imagery is great!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Stuart/Ezra has a hard attitude... but I'm so gonna keep reading =D
Just wondering... could you subscribe to me story LOVE HEARTS ON MY WINDOWS? Just wondering =D

I really like this :) Update soon?

I deffinetly agree with Leftover Carnage above. Except a little less harsh about the mibba writers thing hahaha :) I'm a little unsure of the plot, can't really figure out where it's going. But hey, maybe you want it that way!
Stuart/Ezra is packin' alot of attitude, I LOVE IT. :) but why?? Hopefully we'll find out soon, yes?

I really like Stuart/Ezra. She seems like she brings a lot of attitude to the story which I personally love. Teh only thing that I thought didn't feel as realistic as it should be was that the desriptive paragraphs seemed a little to formal, like how her thought process and what was going on around her didn't quite flow together as well as they should. I loved how you used real descriptive words though and not the usual bullshit that a lot of writers on mibba put in their stories because they can't think of ways to spice up their writing. This is very interesting and I am very curious to see where it will go since the plot right now seems a little unclear, but of course it's the first chapter.