I get that Aiden has been through a lot... But I dont see why he has to take it out on his friends. Especially Allyn... Because Allyn never did anything to him...they stopped being friends becasue of AIDENS dad... So why does he hate Allyn? Growl. I love it though. Update please??
O.o WTF! I LOVES IT HOW IS IT POOSIBLE YOUR NOT GETTING COMMENTS??ZOMG POOR AIDEN AND ALLYN AND AND AND (hypervenalating) HIS BEST FRIEND WHO'S NAME I CAN'T REMEBER!!!!!! UPDATE SOON? OR MAYBE WHEN YOU CAN? OR SOMETIME IN TH FUTURE??
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i really like how this story doesnt just rush right into the relationship and it takes time to build and show the background of the characters and what they're like and it's not all cliche like most are. i also like how you can feel the emotions from everyone
Hey if anyone reads this anytime soon, please make sure you read it all. So I've noticed a decrease in comments. Okai then. But what I did notice is that this story was reported. I knew what for before I even checked. Yes Grammar/ Spelling. Now it doesn't frustrate me that someone reported it. I even appreciated the note they left with the report unlike my other two stories that were reported. but what did make me mad was that the person did not have the decency to tell me about it first. I usually go back and edit my chapters, but I have been lazy. I'm not perfect, not even close. I'm sure it is terrible. but if you have a problem with the story please contact me and tell me about it then being a fucking pussy and going straight to report me. I thank the person who reported us though. I needed something to tell me to edit my stories, and there we go, that was it. For future reference I'd appreciate to know who had an issue and what that was at least before you report or after. Thank you, and please keep reading: When In Love, Forced To Part (I'm so sorry for all the chapter delays) A author, Chrissy
Aw I like this but it's currently quite sad. Poor guitar :( and Allyn. And lol the "And I'm tired...bye." part made me laugh so hard even though they're all injuredifyed.
Capitulo seis: Wow i just notice i never read it o.O Dude his dads an ass! Wtf imma blond slap him>:) Aww i hope Allyn is ok and nothing bad happens to him! That douche bag better not hurt his sissy! 'NEWAYS great update:) <3 Any
Capitulo cinco: Yay their okay<3 OMG i think i kinda know how their going to meet... But it probably wont be like that! 'NEWAYS as always perfect chapter:D <3 Any