Live Fast, Die Young - Comments

Win. I think Sid is one of my favorite characters I've ever read about.

Epic chapter, as always.

::hugs:
I love it.

Amazing.
This may be my new favorite story on Mibba I've come across.
It's just, wow.
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Hey! Sorry for the delay (:
I have to admit that I always agree with other commenters about the story - and once again, I agree with them.
And chapter two was not crappus, stfu x] <3
I'll sub so I can read more later :D

I loved the second chapter, and it was definitely not crappus!

It really gave the character, well, character. You've introduced him in such a way that the reader is instantly aware of his personality - it takes talent to do that.

"sang like the drunken sex-crazed British man he was."
I'd be lying if I said that didn't make me giggle xD

Very good second chapter:D
It was not crappus! ^^

The detail and description was amazing; it put me there<3
"The song started back up and Josef began running around the room like a jungle man, and sang like the drunken sex-crazed British man he was."
-Your characters are brought to life.

You're amazing.
The urban landscape, the character's condition, everything. You described everytthing perfectly. Oh, and I mean perfectly.
I loved your other stuff, but this was something else. As silk tea. said, It's a great improvement.

I haven't done this in a while, but I'm subscribing :)

Good ending line.
You have this way of describing things that brings it to life. :D
I'm seriously jealous --.....--
Favourite line:
"After all, being nocturnal was so much more exhilarating than anything else."

Beyond words-amazing

I loved this<3 You did a good job, I cant wait to read more. =D I do think the font could have been a little bigger, though. I don't know if that was just me, but it bothers my eyes a little bit.

Oh wow, Mat this was awesome.
You did really great.
I felt like you really improved in your writing just from this.
Also, just to let you know if you have Josef talk again.
I want him to kind of sound like the drunken man that Russell Brand sounds like. :]