A Killer In Me Is A Killer In You - Comments

Whoa...love the suspense...and the descriptions
totally awesome!!! More soon?

:cute: This is brilliant.
And I'm stumped for words.

And I've also just realised, :tehe: that you're the only person who updates regularly. D: Ew. It's making me feel bad for not updating Welcome To My World..

:arms: Keep going, it's by far one of the best stories I've read on here.

Ah, poor Frank.... I hope Gerard can help him

STFU Thanks.:

Finally, I've been able to comment! :cheese:
Everytime I'd be nearly finished, someone would interrupt me. D:

But really, this is... this is very good. You cannot say that you suck at life through your writing, because this story is magic.
This is terrible. You have had about 34 readers and only 5 subscribers. Not to mention only 3 of your subscribers comment.

Don't let anyone, including yourself, tell you that you can't write. Because you can. So very well.

The thing I like about this story is that you can describe things so well. The corpse in the bag; the way you described her, no matter how gross, it was amazing and formed strong images in my mind. Frank's apartment; the way you went about explaining what it looked like really did show that Frank needs help.

This is a brilliant story.

(:

^^I agree with this

This story is amazing and I love the descriptions of it all.

Poor Frank, driven to the point he goes to his best friend. What a position it puts Gerard in though!

More soon

Finally, I've been able to comment! :cheese:
Everytime I'd be nearly finished, someone would interrupt me. D:

But really, this is... this is very good. You cannot say that you suck at life through your writing, because this story is magic.
This is terrible. You have had about 34 readers and only 5 subscribers. Not to mention only 3 of your subscribers comment.

Don't let anyone, including yourself, tell you that you can't write. Because you can. So very well.

The thing I like about this story is that you can describe things so well. The corpse in the bag; the way you described her, no matter how gross, it was amazing and formed strong images in my mind. Frank's apartment; the way you went about explaining what it looked like really did show that Frank needs help.

This is a brilliant story.

(:

I think the repeat is good, it kinda makes it all clear
But, oo, whats in the house?
*intrigued*

his is an amazing update. It maes you feel sorry for Frank like he doesn't know what he is doing... interested to know the why though.
More soon!

Woah. I love it. Few fan fics really catch my attention and this one really pulled me in.I like the short chapters, it kinda builds the suspense. I like how you describe his emotions, how he is just overwhelmed with guilt. Anyway, I'm subscribing

Update!

Wow, he has killed more tan once then? Ooo serial killer, interesting...
Update soon, this is great stuff

longer or not.... hmm, in the end the length of he chapters is up to you and I will read them whaever :)
Great update, can't wait for more...

oh nice, I thought the killer would be Gerard.... shows what I know!

good start now keep it going!

I wanted to be the first (being impatient) Get this started!!!