July 13th, 2010 at 12:16am
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You do write beautifully. You can write well and make it intriguing without using lots of dialogue, which is something I'm trying to learn how to do in my writing. This was just great :DJune 22nd, 2010 at 09:35pm
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I really liked this.
The layout was so pretty and the story matched it.
Free. The word itself gave me hope, the word itself made shivers run down my spine. The word made me smile with the thought of it. It was such a tiny word, so many people had freedom and yet it was so easy to take away.
I really loved that part (:
Well done.June 22nd, 2010 at 09:15pm -
The layout is adorable.
I really, really, really love this one-shot.
Your writing is just, great.June 9th, 2010 at 01:45am -
^^^ipod lover@@@ i love that too!!! Freedome: so many people take advanage of it.. but when its gone, its the worst thing you can do to a person
i loved the story, i know this probably sounds funny, but i wanted to go run and save her. Show her the way to somewhere safe..June 7th, 2010 at 10:33pm -
Dude, I really like this. It's really good.
Free. The word itself gave me hope, the word itself made shivers run down my spine. The word made me smile with the thought of it. It was such a tiny word, so many people had freedom and yet it was so easy to take away. - I really LOVE that paragraph.June 7th, 2010 at 08:01pm -
:D I liked it. It was very well written. Although I have no clue why she was running, I felt her need to escape.June 7th, 2010 at 06:18am
I love this! (:
I felt the urgency - to get out of the there, away from her father. I was rooting for Julie all along, and now I feel quite silly for saying that. :*
All in all, this is amazing. I loved every moment.
And when she struck that pose, before being completely free, it was kinda like she was flipping her father off, to me. xD