Biting the Dust - Comments

  • kallyn3

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    Aww I love this one, too! When I saw Jesse was in it I was kinda worried it'd be Rachel and Jesse together. Thank goodness it wasn't, I haated them together! Buut yea, I love it!
    June 26th, 2010 at 02:14am
  • legacy .

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    Jesse needs to fix his hair, but other than that I adore him. And this. And Rachel. And this. And Finn. And um, did I mention this?
    I think you know these characters and your portrayal of them was spot on. Rachel's response to Jesse's apology was such a Rachel thing to say.
    Great job : )
    June 14th, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • falling slowly.

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    I absolutely adored this! I laughed out loud when I read the part about Finn humming Another One Bites The Dust. Very clever (:
    Major kudos for this one-shot!
    June 14th, 2010 at 09:40pm
  • silk tea.

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    I think Jesse is ugly. >.<
    I prefer Finn completely.
    But seriously, I love it.
    I love how you do sort of continuations of your one shots.
    Very noice. XD
    June 8th, 2010 at 05:54am
  • lee lee black.

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    Alice, commenting on this one-shot maybe the last thing I do on Mibba so I'm glad I get to do it with joy and praise.

    This was wonderful. To take something so easily hidden within the rest of the episode and flesh it out and make it alive - it takes real talent.

    You've always had this natural ability to write emotional things so well. Your stories outshine most.

    If I ever come lurking, it will be to see what you write next.
    June 7th, 2010 at 09:27am