Give Me a Break - Comments

This. This. Your imagery. Let’s order a whiskey and crack the ice between our teeth so they shatter like the plates you threw from our window.

It's the best. Ryan is so broken, even then. Even before.

I envy how well you write.

O.O can this be any more perfect?

I just. Yeah. You know I love it. Ryan's internal monologue makes me hurt so bad - where you compare his fathers alcoholism to Spencer drinking is just. Wow. I'm a sucker for Ryan-fic where he's dealing with the aftermath of his fathers drinking problem.

Please. More.

@ Ridahna
YES!

So, I was thinking of maybe writing a prequel to this story (so lots of Spencer/Ryan goodness). I'll probably do it regardless but I was wondering if anyone would be interested in it?

I started rereading this, and just. Wow. I remember now why it was always on my mind, wondering if you were going to update. It's one of the most poignant, well-written stories on this site.

Thank you so much to everyone who commented. <3 I appreciate it more than I could ever say and you guys are the only reason I could finish this. Honestly, you are the reason this story is here and finished and I could never thank you enough. <3 <3 <3

You have no idea how much this story means to me. I had a tear at the end. Pink Floyd didn't really help. Wish You Were Here.

God damn, girl.

Heart-wrenchingly beautiful. I want to keep you forever...

Very sweet... Ryan's personality works really well with the inner conflict - angsty fiction. It's just perfect.

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Gorgeous. Oh, and six words "it was all just a dream..." will fix the SpencerSmith problem('m just saying :D)

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Jesus. That was... really difficult to read.

Just. I hate 1st person, but...

Holy shit did I need this right now.

Woah! What was that note? What! Blurg!
Anyways... It was such a pleasant surprise to find this update in my inbox. :) Fantastic job, dearie.

WOOOO UPDATE!
I loved it, as usual.

I just love how you've developed the characters.
:D

This is amazing so far. I can't wait for the next chapter :D

holy SHIT! that was amazing! incredible! just ... wow! that just really explains things actually. to me anyway. wow. loved it, update soon!

Seriously! You are a complete genious! How do you come up with this, the way Ryan thinks is basically how I think, do you somehow sneak into our brains and write stuff down to make us be struck with complete awe of how genious you are?! Of course that isn't possible and the simple thing is that you are incredible but I still am very fond of you. Keep this up, it makes people happy.

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