I'm not going to lie, I loved this. Hahaa. For one, it has James Franco in it, and that alone, is amazing. Lol. I loved that it had this sort of taboo to it - sneaking around and James being Ella's mother's boyfriend. You didn't hold back, and described everything vividly - I love that. It was well written, and easy to read. Like the person above me said, the imagery was great and I wish that there was more to it - to see how the summer played out between them. Lol. I also liked that you switched up the positions! You've definitely given the rest of the entries competition! (: