I LOVE THIS! I especially am soo in love with your writing style. This is one of the few sci-fi stories that actually interests me, haha. Please keep going! :)
Damn, just when she was getting to the good part, lol. Hahaha, James and Smith's relationship is interestingly amusing.:) Hahaha, it's like Smith likes them feisty.xD Hmmm, it looks like he called her down for more of a different reason than cleaning.o: Can't wait to see what happens next.:D
The plot seems as though it will having me wanting to read more, it's very interesting. Try to update soon, please? And I do love your writing style, I must say.o:
I like James. Lol, and it seems as though Smith has a liking to her, correct?o: Oh, and I can't help but wonder why you named her james. I have a little brother named james, hahaha.
I also can't wait to see what James reads next.o.o