Take Away The Pain - Comments

I like this.

This was amazing.
I really liked how it was written in 3rd person.
You definitely have a talent for writing.
:)

That was amazing.
I loved how you described everything.
It felt more realistic than most other stories.

you have such an amazing ability to write,
this story was awesome as well,
and now i wish i had a bigger vocabulary so i could use some word other than awesome...
^.^ keep writing.... I loved it!!!!

This was just AMAZING !
The past and present parts were beautifully put toqether .
I loved it !

Oh my freaking god!
I loved this so so much =]
It was so sad, yet so uplifting and adorable.
"You will always have a place in my home...and my heart" <3
Good luck in the contest Lili! Amazing entry =]

Omggg!
This was soooo good.
You're such an amazing writer! :D
I love it!!!

This was awesome! :D
brennan's hot too butttttt anyways lol...
I love the storyline :)

This was... amazing.
I loved how you alternated between the past and present, because it really showed how much Brennen has changed.
Wonderful.
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