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  • Nanook

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    So I just read this, and I loved it! I read your other story almost a year ago and stumbled across this one now.
    Even though it was a bit scattered, with it starting with being a love found on tour to moving into very supernatural aspects to then just kind of going into a normal type of love story (with the weirdness of Jack and Alex mixed in, which I don't typically read but pushed through since I loved reading about Alex and Katy), it was definitely interesting. lol. That's probably the longest sentence I've ever typed. But yeah, you definitely kept me reading and entertained by everything going on.
    I assume it was finished since the last chapter was titled 'The End' and everything seemed to leave off on a happy note, which was good. :) So I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know I enjoyed reading this and think you're a great writer. You'll probably never see this, since you never responded to my other comment either, but I felt the need to leave feedback.
    Great job with this. And it looks like you were maybe considering an epilogue; if you ever do that one day to officially mark this off as complete, I will be here to read it. :)
    December 29th, 2016 at 09:06am
  • whattuplove

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    SEQUEL. please?[: i read this whole thing in a day ahah. i love it[:
    March 20th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • whattuplove

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    BLAAAHHHHHHHHH make a sequel or ill like, eat you or something. watch out.

    loljk. at leassstttt an epilogue. but yeah a sequel would be amazing.
    March 11th, 2011 at 04:53am
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    Ohmygosh, I read this story in two days and I'm so sad it's over, please please make a epilogue, it would make my day(:
    You're a great writer<3
    January 23rd, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • xXxBethaneexXx

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    love it!!
    please give us an epilouge >.<
    maybe a sequel? ;)
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:15pm
  • AllTimeMariekex

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    Im so in love with this story ):
    I want like another 1000 Chaptersss ;P
    December 31st, 2010 at 02:01pm
  • girl at the rockshow

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    WOW i have NEVER read a story with more than 30/40 chapters - but wow this was amazing, you're definatly a talented writter and i loved reading this :D
    i mean it started out with just a guy and a girl- they fell in love, she DIED, came back, they had a kid, preggers again and then married- if that doesnt yell out invicible i don't know what would :P
    i loved it all :D and i would love to read an epilogue too - like kinda conclude it all :D

    -Amber :)
    December 27th, 2010 at 06:42pm
  • AllTimeMariekex

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    You really really really have to make a sequel of this story ;O
    December 26th, 2010 at 03:19pm
  • iiChrisx

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    Omg Please Get More Up Krystal <3!
    December 17th, 2010 at 09:03am
  • AllTimeMariekex

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    ghehe (:
    I want like 100 more chapters <3
    December 16th, 2010 at 07:50am
  • AllTimeMariekex

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    I miss Jack ):
    And I need the Next Chapter <3
    I'm addicted!
    December 14th, 2010 at 03:11pm
  • iiChrisx

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    Omg Please Get More Up :-| i wanna hear alot more :-D !!!
    I love this story i want to hear more from me :-O!
    December 13th, 2010 at 02:01am
  • AcidicStrawberryBomb

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    Make a sequel! Make a sequel! pretty please?
    December 13th, 2010 at 01:30am
  • ensamblegeek

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    I love this story!! haha I really cannot wait until the next chapter!! update soooon :')
    December 12th, 2010 at 08:00am
  • LostInStereo920

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    This story is amazing. I read all of it in like 1 day when there was only about 49 chapters left. I'm like in love with this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
    December 11th, 2010 at 10:12pm
  • Love_Terra

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    I LOVE Zack :)
    December 10th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • AllTimeMariekex

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    Omgg, it's soo awesome 8D
    Can't wait till the next chapters.. I'm so in love with your storyy
    It isn't really normal anymore <33
    December 9th, 2010 at 09:21pm
  • AllTimeMariekex

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    They really have to stay together or else I'm gonna die xD
    I love you storyy (: , I wanna ready the next chapter so badly ;o
    December 7th, 2010 at 07:24am
  • Love_Terra

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    Love ya too! <3 and its AMAZING <3 of course just like you bestie
    December 6th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • AllTimeMariekex

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    Next please 8D
    I really love this story <3
    I hopee it will have 100 chapters or something XD
    December 3rd, 2010 at 02:58pm