Infected - Comments

I didn't expect any less from you Sempai. I love how natural and nonchalant Thomas was with his nature. He simply embraced the fact that he had to eat humans, as if it was the most normal thing on the Universe. In some way, I found it humorous. A zombie that was able to rationalize and think like a human. Fantastic.
I was expecting those girls to die, and something inside me wanted that. He only got one bite, which must suck.

Amazing story idea, Tara. :']

I'm utterly grossed out, but I love it! The thought of flesh being eaten...heck, just the word flesh sends my stomach on a roller coaster. This put a wonderful spin on the thought processes of zombies, and I'm glad that they weren't just mindless, droning vessels. They thought, allbeit entirely sickening and predatorial. I really did love it, and I think your take on the zombie genre is stellar, top notch. I was rooting for the girls, naturally, but I think deep down, I kinda wanted them to get eaten just because they didn't run when they had the chance.
Very well written, marvelous descriptions and frighteningly real. One of the best I've read.

I liked it. The fact of a zombie skateboarding made my day. I'm still laughing. Totally cool.

Yes.

It's a yes. The description was perfect. A great balance of narration and dialogue. Excuse the bad pun, you really brought some life into this.

Gah, I love it!