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  • Fantasy Monroe

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    Wow! That was amazing! I had tears in my eyes but I didn't' cry even though I wanted too.
    The only thing wrong was
    "Life's not simple, I know. Nothing can ever be simple. But you can make this easier on both of us. You can let me in, and you can give me another shot", she stated" Isn't suppose to be "he stated"?
    That's the only thing wrong, but I really did love this :]
    June 13th, 2010 at 05:24am
  • RachelRose523

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    Whoot!! I got the first comment on this. :)

    I almost cried reading this, though I couldn't because I was about ready to fall asleep. :)
    June 9th, 2010 at 01:38pm
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