December 17th, 2007 at 08:31pm
Oh. My. God.
I get it. It's hard to put into words, but I get it. And the metaphor you used was amazing.
Poor Ryan. He's so ... lost.
I'm actually jealous.
I wish I had thought of this idea.
The Red Balloon - Comments
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December 16th, 2007 at 09:21pm
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Amazing, tragic, beautiful, sorrowfull.
I loved every word.
I agree, this was really different that I thought, it was great :]December 10th, 2007 at 03:00pm -
awww
I'll admit, i didn't see a connection...cuz i'm really retarded
but It was still really sweet...and sad at the same time...December 10th, 2007 at 08:22am -
Ohh, wow. I got the connection between the balloon and it all right at the end.
This is different than I thought it was going to be, but it was still really good.
My favorite lines:
his favorite piece of art was Ryan Ross.
“Andandand…the train was so pretty. I thought it was going to hurt me but I got off the railroad tracks just in time…and then there was this pretty red balloon and I went after it but tripped and the blood that came from my knees matched the balloon.....Do you remember the red balloon, Jon?"
“Why didn’t you give me the picture of the red balloon?”December 10th, 2007 at 08:20am -
New Jon Walker/Ryan Ross. EnjoyDecember 10th, 2007 at 07:53am
-dies-
It's so pretty. I like balloons and everything in the story.
I feel so sorry for Ryan. I want the red balloon too...