Love Me - Comments

This was heartbreaking. Such a simple storyline, but the way it's written makes it more emotional and more meaningful.
Lovely job, thanks for entering the contest.

Relation to stimulus: 9
Storyline: 9
Grammar and punctuation: 8
Language used: 8
Credibility: 7
Emotive: 9

That was amazing!So sad
People say it’s dumb to cry over a boy, but I’d say it was worth the world to cry over my boy.
I loved that line so much,it's basically everything a girl in love would think

Wooooow. (:
I just entered the same contest and saw your post, saying that you had already finished your entry.
So, me obviously being curious, clicked on the link and read this.

Re-read the first line (including the smiley face), and that is how I think about this entry.
Wow.

It was amazing.

Wow. That was amazing. Really good. :)
It nearly made me cry! >.<