Road to Nowhere - Comments

  • MakingMeFamous

    MakingMeFamous (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    If you guys take time to ask me to read more I surely will
    I love this story so far and all I`m just too lazy to read without being asked
    November 26th, 2010 at 02:40am
  • MakingMeFamous

    MakingMeFamous (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    Black is kinda plain for the backgroundfullness ha ha
    wow this is wrote by tons of people D:
    This makes me think of Among The Hidden based on the summary, short of not really
    sounds cool going to read(:

    First chapter:

    They say an end is a new beginning...

    They don't tell you it's not always a good beginning..
    ^an amazing quote ha ha

    you are good at descriptions I was imagining things

    Oh my I already fell in love with Nellie, she seems like such a cute adorable little loveable kid
    it`s good when you can make someone feel sumtn like love

    Um, I`m trying to comprend the new family member thing
    I`m guessing they pretend people are their family to protect them

    aw, I feel bad for gage and becca

    they have a maid?? the goverment doesnt seem that bad then

    I really like the idea of this story

    how did yinz come up with it??
    November 26th, 2010 at 02:38am
  • luminos.

    luminos. (600)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I love the concept.
    Awesome idea.
    August 14th, 2010 at 11:42pm
  • Crash Thrusts.

    Crash Thrusts. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    I like this story. :)
    July 28th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • Farce.

    Farce. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    I like Adam! He's just strange.
    July 12th, 2010 at 11:03pm
  • Dicklicker69

    Dicklicker69 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    With the first 2 chapters, I'm so excited this story is actually beginning to become real. I've had this idea for awhile and I wanna thank you guys for helping out! Can't wait to read the rest of everyone's chapters!

    XOXO
    July 9th, 2010 at 11:06pm
  • Farce.

    Farce. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Good job so far everyone! Hopefully, we can score more readers and comments with following chapters!
    July 9th, 2010 at 03:52pm