The chapter was so simple but it had strong details hidden in it. Every chapter just keeps getting better and better. I simply adore this story.It's one of my top faves.Aspen and Matt just fit like puzzle pieces.It's so perfect.The conversations they have always are short and sweet.Less is always more. Amazing update! p.s. You're an amazing writer,seriously.
I can see where Matt's coming from, but I'd really like for him to consider how he affects Aspen (which by the way, I love the nickname Red). I'm always excited for an update. (:
I had a lot to think on this chapter. First, I didnt really like that Matt stood up Aspen, but on his side of the story, all the shit that had been happening with Travis must have been time conmusing (or whichever way it´s spelled haha) and frstrating i assume. i guess i´m kinda thinking it more ina real way, of how it affected FFTL in real life. So yeah, i mean, he does have a life without Aspen. Second, I´m really curious about Mindy, like, what´s her deal? why is she working there and why is she so interested in Aspen specifically? I wanna know. By the way, I love the name Aspen.
The last thing I need is a red headed, depressed, underage girlfriend who draws pictures that could give Stephen King fucking night mares. Oh really? I think someone's a bit confused, because Derek seems to insist that a certain someone has a little crush on our little red head.
I'm glad Mindy gave him a little guilt trip though about blowing Aspen off because he definitely deserved it. I get that he hardly knows the girl but obviously he knew that there was something between them even if it was only being formed over some bullshit visitation hour. If he honestly thought that not showing up after he told her that he would ... then the dude needs a reality check.
And I'm sure he'll get one soon.
But yes on the idea that she could get into their shirt designs! Brilliant.
BLAH BLAHHH we all know he likes her. So he can suck it, and face it. (: this is super duper amazing, & every update makes me so excited, it takes me five minutes to calm down before I can actually read the update.
Woah. I kept staring at my computer screen like a guppy. Then I finally decided what to say so I'm writing now. All this thrown into your face on one setting has my mind spun.This chapter is my very favorite..so far lol.I love how you got a little into her past.And the mom woah that made my stomach a little unsettled.I can't help but wonder what all really is the reason for her being there. Anyways,haha amazing and wonderful update! P.S. I hope to find out why Matt was such a dick and stood her up.
aweeee, I was hoping to see the conversation Aspen & Matt wouldv've had in this chapter. phooey. ): oh well, it was a great chapter anyway. & I would've kicked that bitch in the wrist if she did that to me, just sayin'. <3
He stood her up? That's shitty of him. As much as I'd like to blame it on the possible car trouble, half of me just thinks that he freaked the fuck out. She's 17 and in an institution, but he still felt a spark... maybe? I'm probably wrong, but it's enough to freak anybody out even a little. But a phone call would have been rad, just so that she knew that he wasn't completely trying to be an ass.
But this bitch is allowed to kick the shit out of her and get away with it? That's hardly fair, and Aspen deserves better than that.
The terrors are scary though :( But I feel excited about these next few chapters. Like as much as you've told us about her still isn't really enough - there's more than just a few drawings and a crazy mom.
I'm totally aware that I could be totally wrong about both Matt being an ass and Aspen having more secrets, but I'm just going on instinct here. I love you <3
Wow.I never find anything partically interesting on here about Matt Good. I love this. I love him.He's so handsome and artistic and well..strange lol.But I love this story none the less. Good job.And please write some more soon! <3
WOW, JUST WOW. okay the way you described both of them was amazing. & the chapter definitely made up for the wait. Most definitely. I don't know what else to say other than, I need more (:
Do you enjoy being a perfect writer? Because you should.
I don't think that meeting could have gone any better. It seemed like a harmless 'icebreaker' but it really allowed us to get some glimpses into their lives and the complexity of each character. But her age throws me off. Is their friendship going to continue until she's 19 and THEN become something more after she checks out, or are they going to get closer and have a romance even though she's still underage and in a center?
I hate not being able to predict the future.
And the picture! I love that something that might throw an average guy off was so perfect to someone like Matt. A drawing like that might make someone else wonder what the hell she was thinking when she got the idea to create something so graphic - but Matt's too good to fall into the category of a normal guy. Seriously. It's rad. How much do you want for it?"