The Father I Never Wanted is the Person I've Always Needed - Comments

Star Angel (100)

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love this please update soon

January 15th, 2013 at 05:33am

sweetie (100)

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thank you i plan on going back and fixing some of that but i glad you like it. =) ill update again soon.

January 13th, 2013 at 04:45pm

chelz2012 (100)

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This is really good, I enjoy your writing style. Only complaint I have is that you need to check your spelling. Other then that it's amazing... Id enjoy beating the shit out of Michelle at this point...

January 13th, 2013 at 08:35am

TilDeathDoUsParty (100)

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I like this, only thing is you really need to do a spell and grammar check more often, but the story line is really interesting (:

October 7th, 2011 at 10:29pm

jaylon1134 (100)

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I lovecthis story

September 10th, 2011 at 03:13pm

Star Angel (100)

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Love this please update soon

September 10th, 2011 at 07:20am

Free_Spirit (100)

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Good story. i can't wait for the next update. :)

September 5th, 2011 at 05:34am

sweetie (100)

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I'm glad you and kind of relate to the story =) and thank yu guys for commenting for me it makes me want to write more!

August 1st, 2011 at 03:48am

ambird96 (100)

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I love this <3 soooo much (: please keep writting<3(:

August 1st, 2011 at 03:05am

Stewartxracingx16 (100)

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it reminds me of my life, minus being pregnant, actually meeting my dad, and falling in love with one of his best friends.

July 31st, 2011 at 08:52pm

mistery gurl (100)

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woah just read all 12 chapters!!!
i love it! im gladd that she gets on with
matt thou!
update soon XP

September 13th, 2010 at 06:20am

secrets-that-die (100)

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i hope my 17 birthday will be like that :D that would be a dream come true lol
loved it!

July 6th, 2010 at 08:32am

Heavenly Syn (100)

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I can only hope my 17th birthday will be like that......
Loved the Update!

July 6th, 2010 at 08:13am

Vanzchyk2011 (100)

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i wish that was my 17th birthday
loved it please please update soon

July 6th, 2010 at 01:27am

secrets-that-die (100)

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Wonder what's he goin to do now?
More soon please
<33

July 3rd, 2010 at 09:15am

Heavenly Syn (100)

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I loved the update! Now I wonder what's going to happen next, so update soon so I don't get a headache from thinking about it to long. :)

July 3rd, 2010 at 03:36am

Vanzchyk2011 (100)

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this story is really good
please update again REALLY soon

June 27th, 2010 at 04:14am

Poison.The.Hero (100)

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oh wow i love it sooo much....Update again today please?

June 21st, 2010 at 08:26am

Poison.The.Hero (100)

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oh wow i love it sooo much....Update again today please?

June 21st, 2010 at 08:26am

sweetie (100)

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Thanks we are all gettting back to normal. i'll be updating soon

June 17th, 2010 at 06:41pm