Firstly, great name choice. I'm so sick of the oh-so-overused Maddies and Toris and Jacobs and Nicks. I noticed a few minor spelling mistakes, but nothing too major. But I really really like it. I also like how you have details about the different kinds of cancers, like when Faith was explaining to Alexander about how cancer runs in both sides of her family. I kind of like the shorter chapters, too. That’s usually how I write. I like Macy, too. In general I really like this, please keep writing. :)
June 18th, 2012 at 03:10am
