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  • the celestial teapot

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    Youuu, my dear girlfriend, need to add another chapter to this, so I can fangirl over it.
    July 2nd, 2008 at 04:35pm
  • Greygirlie

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    Eck! Are they..? Did it..? ...Noooo.
    March 8th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • bobard

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    Thanks. ^__^ I'll try finishing the next chapter soon...maybe tonight.
    December 11th, 2007 at 03:34pm
  • Fueled By Dana

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    That was very good. I hope to read more soon.
    December 11th, 2007 at 10:09am
  • bobard

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    XD Alright then; I can live with over-dramatic, as long as it wasn't just short of it.

    Thank you. <3
    December 11th, 2007 at 05:36am
  • Luna Lovegood.

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    It was fairly amazing. I'm not good at constructive crit, so bear with me!

    Ehh, I'm usually not the type to read drama, but it's pretty good. It felt like...real. I guess it was kinda over dramatic, but just a tad. Okay, I fail at this.

    It was amazing. The end.
    December 11th, 2007 at 05:32am
  • bobard

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    I thought I'd be lame and start my own fic's comment thread. :shifty

    Gentle con-crit would be lovely, because frankly, I don't think I do drama too well, as I'm a little too used to writing bubbly comedies, and generally fluffy stuff. :con:
    Thanks for reading!
    December 10th, 2007 at 09:36pm