It was fairly amazing. I'm not good at constructive crit, so bear with me!
Ehh, I'm usually not the type to read drama, but it's pretty good. It felt like...real. I guess it was kinda over dramatic, but just a tad. Okay, I fail at this.
I thought I'd be lame and start my own fic's comment thread. :shifty
Gentle con-crit would be lovely, because frankly, I don't think I do drama too well, as I'm a little too used to writing bubbly comedies, and generally fluffy stuff. :con: Thanks for reading!