A Rose Lost in a Bush - Comments

OMG this is well godd Rachel, although its a little short oh well
Yay i helped somehow by commenting and subscribing

Yeah, I agree with Tara except it's Scott Stapp hehe and you like him so you won't do that xD

You used my quote <3 hehe

Aww she's being treated like a murderer lol

hahahaha love it... <--- not sure whats with the haha's though o.O ah well, tis good, slightly scary... ummm yeah, hmmm ideas hahaha i will say make the guy who died John Stape!!! HAHAHA YEAH rach will like that very much ^_^ xx

Awww, you know how much I love murder <3 So does most people because I've randomly been saying murder a lot lately. I wonder why? Anyways, me wanna read more hehe. Rachl likey (Ha! likey isnt even a word)

Great start Missy Pineapple. There's nothing more interesting than a murder to get a story rolling

Thanx for the help Moosey! You never know there might be AIDS involved later in the story!

Yaaaaaaaay! I GAVE THE FIRST COMMENT AND YOU GET A STAR CUZ OF IT YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!

Anyway ¬¬
Nice beginning, very mysterious and detailed. She should be at school and all like OMFG I saw someone getting killed (in her head) and then people are like, OMG you look terrible are you alright and she's like...AIDS