Winter. - Comments

Oh, this is so tragically pretty. I love the comparisons, as the reader slowly learnt more...the bittersweet reflection at the end, and then the twist of the last line. Flawless. Cute layout, too.

This was really amazing, in a way I felt like it was more of a poem though. I have no idea why. ;-; Sorry if what I said hurt you in anyway.
But anyways.
Your detail is amazing, it made me see it cleary of what was happening.

You did a wondeful job with this(: <3

I think you will win in the contest.

The detail in this is so amazing.<3 (:

I just ate it up, missy. As I was reading, I was thinking of ice-skaters on a pond for some reason. :D That doesn't make any sense more than likely, aha, but I really like that stereotypical I have for winter. This didn't really enforce that but oh well. I'm rambling now, sorry. Back on point. (:

Like I said, the detail in this was amazing. Every sentence was thick with meaning and absolutely delicious for my eyes to devour. :) I have this underlying respect for winter now, aha. I agree with Aluuu when she said it was short but gorgeous and I also agree with Undefined when she said this was beautiful. :)

Amazing Job.<3

i love it ash its so good

This piece is really powerful. I like it!
I don't really know what else to say! So short yet so full of beauty!

Hey! Sorry for the delay >.<
I can't really say much about it mainly because I'm speechless. It's so short, but so gorgeous. Wow!
Lovely job (: