Shine on Me - Comments

SayHaayAllie (100)

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There's a few errors to do with grammar and such, but all in all, this is a brilliant story, keep it up :~)

January 21st, 2013 at 03:19am

littlelexy (100)

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Amazing story! Update please!

November 3rd, 2012 at 02:35pm

leolion1234 (100)

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I'm really enjoying this story. Jasmine is quite the character and that makes her so much fun to read about. Update soon!!

August 8th, 2012 at 08:02am

Mela- (100)

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I really like this story, as well as 'Ghost of a Chance'. I hope you continue this story! Jasmine is awesome. :P

August 1st, 2012 at 11:29pm

animestars (100)

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I haven't read this in forever!! Sorry about that, but I'm all caught up & I hope that you update again soon!!

March 19th, 2012 at 12:07am

xXLostXSoulXLoverXx (100)

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I like Jas :) I love her attitude :) Can't wait for more :)

March 10th, 2012 at 11:22am

choirgirlx3 (100)

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I love Jasmine's attitude and how she forced them to meet :) she's a boss

March 2nd, 2012 at 07:20pm

strawberrybubble (100)

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lllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it so darn much. I've already subscribed ♥

March 2nd, 2012 at 07:54am

jskars (100)

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Idk if I'm the only one who was hoping Jasper would try to screw Jasmine... I know, I am a huge perv! Lol Team Jasper

March 1st, 2012 at 08:52am

Bamboo33010 (100)

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Jasmine is so fucking awesome!

March 1st, 2012 at 05:12am

choirgirlx3 (100)

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LOVING EVERY MOMENT OF IT. Just post more soon please

February 27th, 2012 at 12:15am

jskars (100)

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I so wish the chapter was longer lol :(

February 26th, 2012 at 11:52pm

choirgirlx3 (100)

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LOVING EVERY MOMENT OF IT. Just post more soon please

February 26th, 2012 at 09:23pm

venture;; (100)

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AY-MAY-SING! Just like always! I like how Emmett talks about Paul being put out like a dog, it made me chuckle! And was that some jealousy about Jasmine hanging out with Paul? haha Oh and the argument between Alice and Jasmine got kind of heavy there for a moment! I thought Jasmine might transform into a shifter! haha Glad to see that they are friends again! And whoa mama, the secret was almost out! Oh manny, can't (but almost can) imagine how she is going to react when she actually does find out that the Cullens are Vampires! Oh, I wonder how she will react to Jacob, Paul and them keeping it a secret from her?! OoOoOo...haha anyways, phenomenal chapter as always, you never disappoint girlie!

P.S. You had a few spelling and grammatical errors, someone rushed! ;) hehe

February 23rd, 2012 at 01:59am