July 9th, 2010 at 02:39am
See, I was right when I said that you should post it!
Great job, I loved how they spoke to each other, the mockery, the teasing... it was all very cute and made me feel happy! But I didn't expect Joe liking Autumn, that was a shocker I have to admit... That is all my darling... I loved it!
:D
Nikki Sixx's hair style is awesome. I wish I could pull that off XD
“What are you guys, three turning four?” Phil asked, receiving an insulting look from Joe, his bottom lip trembling like a little kid would. Someone had his pouty face on.
“I’m alweady fwor.”
XDDDDD This made me literally laugh out loud. I love when stories make me do that =D
“I am awake; I’m just resting my eyes.”
My grandfather says that all the time! It's so funny when people say that when they were clearly falling asleep!
I think it was sad that she and Joe had feelings for each other, and that Viv had feelings for her, too. That's a sucky position to be in, the guy who gets dumped by a girl for a friend.
I really did enjoy this, though =)