I’m standing closer to the edge than I should be allowed - Comments

Love the ending.

Gosh, I'm glad you've finished. It's torture trying to find a perfect ending, I loved it. :)

YAY I LOVE YOUR KISSES! :D AND I ALSO PLAY AT MCDONALD'S PLAYGROUNDS EVEN AT MY AGE! :D also... like the second to last chapter I thought was the epilogue... then your little note said, "next will be the epilogue" and I was like Say what?!
HAHA I LOVED THE STORY AND I CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL! FABULOUS WORK DARLING! JUST GORGEOUS! :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
I'm so sad it's over :[
I cant wait to see what the sequel is going to be about...

Knew it! I frickin knew it! I feel so dang happy with myself for catching all of the hints. I knew it was Tom. I knew it from the first time you mentioned him. Knew it. xD

VHAT! VHAT VENT VRONG!O.o WHAT DOES SHE MEAN THEN NOTHING?! IM FREAKING THE FREAK OUT! :O
O>o besides that... i busted my spleen laughing at the sparkle prank that made him look like Edward :D hahahahha....
And the V is pronounced with a W
Why?
Why not? :D haha

I put sparkles in his car vent. He looked like fucking Edward Cullen for days. LMFAO!

haha oooo up north???
I liked you update ...

hi.
i loooooooove it...
cant wait for another upy-date

I love this story! (:

IMPORTANT!: the ending of the latest chapter is perfect.. I LOVE IT! DONT CHANGE IT! :D

haha AWE! Zaney knows how to make Murphy all happy... and if she isn't happy that he's staying then she should get smacked a few times so she will stop seeing crossed eyed. XD

LOVE IT! like you knew that already, but it's fun to say once in awhile... it should just be assumed anyways haha :D

the thing on chapter 82 its lyrics by bring me the horizon :')

Those lyrics.

I’ve got a secret.
It’s on the tip of my tongue.
It’s on the back of my lungs.
& I’m gonna keep it.

Aren't your friends. There from a band called Bring Me The Horizon, song - Chelsea smile.
:)

You changed the title... and it's shorter! :D haha so when I tell my friend what story Im reading... I don't have to try to think about it much.. YAY I like the title, fits better with the story
definitely now sense Murphy is all depressed and is all down and it's getting Zane down...
Oh no Murphy... I wanna just hug her and tell her that it's all going to be okay!

Did you change the name of the story today????

i cant wait for the next update

Noooooo! Ok, well i'm kind of relieved. I thought for sure that you were going to kill Halle off. Wait, are you??? Ahhhhhh man! Updateeeeee! xD

NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! HAL CANT BE MISSING! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH IM IN DENIAL!

great! more plz :)

Ah! This chapter is so cute! AH I want Zane and Murphy to have a baby! :D haha... that would be so freaking sweet... haha :D