June 12th, 2010 at 02:27pm
its really good
i hope u keep it going
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June 11th, 2010 at 10:23pm
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Yay moore!!!!!!!!!!!!June 11th, 2010 at 01:38pm
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Yay you did it !!!!
Keep up the good work :)June 11th, 2010 at 07:32am -
I can really relate to this story. Cause once I was a vampire too.June 11th, 2010 at 07:05am
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LoVe it. Funny that Casper (Jasper) got annoyed with the who interrupt thing
update soonJune 11th, 2010 at 02:57am -
Really great story. Absolutely amazing. But one thing that's bothering me; try to change up how you write and use different words other than the same words. It'll make the story wayy more interesting. And what helps me is re-reading my story after i finish it so i can check for spelling, grammar, ect. it makes the story better. but other than that, i love it!!June 11th, 2010 at 01:28am
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cool i guessJune 11th, 2010 at 12:25am
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more more! :D
this is really a great story so far ^^June 11th, 2010 at 12:18am -
more more! :D
this is really a great story so far ^^June 11th, 2010 at 12:17am -
Wow. This storys cool
I hope you keep updating
Question: how is it that Bellas not pregnant if she is married?
Can't wait to read more :]June 10th, 2010 at 10:19pm
but all the same I THE_MoJo still
LOVES it
Update soon