Goodbye - Comments

That was so sad, but I liked it.
It was very well written

This story made my heart ache as well D:
Who cares if it's cliched? The best stories are cliched.
You did a lovely job with this <3

agh, this story makes my heart ache.
it's gorgeous.
i love the cliches and how the narrator is so incredibly pissed off by them.
i also love the usage of 'darling'. this whole piece is great.

Gosh. This is so sad :[
I dont know why, but I liked it much more now than the first time I read it. I dont know if you did any changes... anyway.
It flew very well, the paragraphs weren't forced, it all fit together. You got the emotion there :[
You didnt mention names but i wasn imagining you know who :] fits fits.
Poor boy :[ Both of them, actually.
One thing I didnt like that much was the very last sentence, I think the story would do even without it... a little bit opened ending, you know? This one is kinda opened too anyway... so sad :/

Good luck with this drabble :]]