YESS INDEED revenge is a dish best served cold!!!!! I understand that Sharlot cant help but be in love with a man from every creature BUT WHY IS DOLL NOT MAD AT HER FOR ACTING ON IT!! i think Doll let Sharlot off too easyyyy. I sort of feel a pinch of sorry for Sharlot for everyone having to know her business but oh well. lol I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THE STORY THOUGH!
HEYY WHERES THE REST!!! lol. That was an intense spill out. I was wondering why everyone only had things to say about her but its a cool plot to add in. I wonder how many races are in your story lol. Thats a lot of people to fall for :). Poor Doll. I was hoping she cheated with Edmund at least lol. Matt, wow, you got the whole guy attitude 100% precisely. A guy would say sum crap like maybe now we could get married, after he already slept with the best friend lol. Can't wait to read the rest!