Teamwork never fails - Comments

  • NICKnEMMA4ever

    NICKnEMMA4ever (105)

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    I LOVE IT!!

    IT WOULD BE COOL TO TURN THIS INTO A STORY!!
    May 28th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • ShadowsFiction

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    Ok, this is just amazing. Most stories I have read, they make Ziva pregnant thus forcing Tony and Ziva together... such cliche stuff... but you made real like stuff happen and I was amazed at your work on this. Great job lovely. PS... I would kill for some more TIVA from you, just saying!
    April 23rd, 2011 at 01:49am
  • Abbycus Forensicus

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    I liked this story very much. The feel of it was relaxed and didn't seem urgent which made it seem more realistic and professional in terms of the team and how they would cope in that situation. Another thing I like about this story is the way you brought Tony and Ziva together. Something I've noticed with this paring is they usually end up together quickly and passionatly but you took your time and made the story individual and original so kudos. Thank you for entering the contest.
    July 14th, 2010 at 04:21pm