You Implied That You Would Wait for Me - Comments

awe i love it!

Does this guy only think about getting with girls? That's do boring... Blah. He seems too old in a young guys body... As if he's a stereotypical older man from a bar who accidentally landed in highschool... It just seems off if you know what I mean.

And an eighth grader talking like they in chapter 4, never in my life... Have I seen that. It seems out of character.

Nine years later!? Are you telling me her mom was okay with her kissing a boy at six years old and she somehow ha the ability to write letters and had mastery over the telephone? I honestly think with the level of commitment you want to talk about, it should have the main characters in university. It doesn't really match, you know?

Anyways back to reading I go!! Haha

I'm glad you started writing this again

i really likw this story but its kinda sad that the two of them didn;t keep their promises i wish they could be together again but im also glad that they are happy with each other!! can't wait for more hope you get past your writers block!!!

Comment Virginity! lol I like this story too. I just hope he doesn't break sweet Averys heart.