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  • XSoulXLoverX

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    Nice job! Sexy hot steamy everything that's great in a scene. I agree with the other comment! :) You're excellent! :) Amazing!
    June 12th, 2010 at 05:10am
  • scarlet_starlet

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    Thank you SO much! :D I'm very glad you enjoyed it. x]
    June 12th, 2010 at 04:53am
  • la dispute.

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    This was really good. I loved how you gave a little description of the character and what she does, and how she met Johnny. It was a good little bit of info. I liked the way you initiated the shower scene; it was cute how he was embarrassed. Lol. I also genuinely laughed when Jane mentioned how the dance lessons she took, paid off. I didn't catch any spelling/grammar mistakes, which is always a plus! It was easy to read, and I enjoyed it! Good luck! (:
    June 12th, 2010 at 04:49am
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