Love the Leaves - Comments

Hmm. Layout made it hard for me to read, and gave me a slight headache :(
but otherwise, it flows nicely.
:)

this was very good i must say :}

I absolutely love how you connected the title of the first chapter to the actual chapter.
Most of the time chapter titles aren't very important, but the way you incorperated it was amazing.
I also love the mysterious feel to this. It's a gorgeous piece of work. <3

I didn't get to finish the whole thing, but it was so good!

Everything flowed nicely and sounded right. You've got a great writing talent :]

thanks :/ ughhhhhh seannnn

It's good to write things all down.Seth is a creeper and you're better than him. A whole lot better.