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  • Screamlikeamaniac!

    Screamlikeamaniac! (100)

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    Hi! I loved it! I think that the tittle was a little awkward,but, I like awkward! Haha. I loved the way that you can. Well. I guess word things! You can describe very well, where as I cannot describe AT ALL! And you should write more Poems!:) You sound like a pro poet! If there is a such thing as a professional poet! haha:) Niiiccccce!

    In other and shorter words, GREAT JOB!
    July 27th, 2010 at 11:11am
  • silk tea.

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    The title is weird.
    But the story is really good.
    You've got a really great descriptive tongue.
    As well as a very poetic way of writing.
    Good job.
    June 21st, 2010 at 08:52pm
  • Cobain.

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    Wow, you have such a beautiful way of describing things.
    Well done, really. (:
    June 21st, 2010 at 05:11pm
  • awful sensations;

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    aww thank you!
    June 21st, 2010 at 08:07am
  • Acid Milk

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    This was just, well, beautiful. :) I'm glad I stumbled upon your swappy journal thingy, because this was great! I love how you described things, it was so lovely.
    June 21st, 2010 at 08:02am
  • awful sensations;

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    eeeppp thanks :)
    June 15th, 2010 at 03:53am
  • La Paix

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    Brilliant! Glad I found this.
    I'll sub it :3
    June 14th, 2010 at 05:40pm
  • jellyfish-spine

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    This was very beautiful. (: You're very poetic in the way you describe things which a lot of authors would kill for. Though there are a few spacing things, it's nothing major and won't dock points. (:
    June 14th, 2010 at 05:48am
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