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  • headintheclouds

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    yeah, okay, i cried. such a sad chapter.
    i hope that they still are able to conceive even if the chances aren't great.
    aww, they so should get married.
    amazing chapter!!
    September 26th, 2010 at 10:08pm
  • PensRock

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    Yes - A little bit of Chase mixed in with the Cole story. I love that.
    Who is this LA friend I wonder.
    Good update.
    September 22nd, 2010 at 08:36pm
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    aww, i loved it. it wasn't sucky at all. i love that ariel's friend came to see her. a GOOD surprise visit. LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 19th, 2010 at 03:30am
  • PensRock

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    Wow Tammy is a bitch. And that's the woman that loved and cared for her - very scary thought.
    Cole is amazing though. Pretty damn perfect. I hope he stays that way, she really needs him.
    Great update. Great game too (well I'm not counting after Cole left the field).
    September 9th, 2010 at 07:04pm
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    omg! I hate Tammy! She's in with James! grrr
    good thing neither of them have legal rights to the boys.
    and Cole and Ariel, I just love them!!!
    September 9th, 2010 at 02:31am
  • There She Goes.

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    Amazing!
    So I love how you showed their relationship isn't perfect because no relationship is.
    It's Britney Spears at the door. ;D
    Update soon?
    September 8th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • headintheclouds

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    Dude! How can you end it there? EVIL!!
    Loved the chapter!! It shows how Cole and Ariel's relationship isn't perfect.
    Who is at the door? I'm so curious!!
    Great work!! Can't wait for more!!
    September 8th, 2010 at 02:20am
  • PensRock

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    I loved the beginning with her remembering when the boys were born. You really got a sense of their connection to each other. That they were a family even before their mom died.
    The party was sweet. Always love a good birthday party!
    COLE showing up was the icing on the cake - so to speak. What a sweatheart.
    The ring proved my point.
    Nice job.
    August 23rd, 2010 at 10:36pm
  • There She Goes.

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    Aw, Cole being all romantic is so sweet.
    I can't wait to see what happens.
    Update soon?
    August 22nd, 2010 at 01:39am
  • headintheclouds

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    omg!! I loved this.
    I love seeing Cole so romantic.
    Amazing work!! Loved it!!!
    Keep up the fabulous work!!!
    August 21st, 2010 at 09:54am
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    aww!! they are growing up so fast!!
    loved the chapter!! I liked how he surprised her.
    Keep up the great work!!
    August 20th, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • headintheclouds

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    Yay!! they moved in together!!!
    I love that she had an LA Kings shirt, hehe
    They just seem to be so perfect for one another. Loved it!!
    More soon please?
    August 14th, 2010 at 09:32am
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    Why did I not know you were writing this? Finally a Phillies story!!! I love Cole! The story is great. Yes move in with Cole. Please.
    August 10th, 2010 at 08:20pm
  • There She Goes.

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    So James is just ugh and needs to go away.
    Loved this. (:
    She should move in with him.
    Update soon?
    July 21st, 2010 at 01:12am
  • squashedbychara

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    I really loved this chapter, dear! (:
    Cole is soooooo sweet, I wish I had someone like him!
    The whole spa thing was so nice of him and I hope she moves in!
    ahhh More soon?!
    July 20th, 2010 at 05:25am
  • headintheclouds

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    James is a sneaky evil bastard.
    Cole is so sweet thinking about her needs. Loved it.
    I hope they move in together! :D
    Can't wait for more!!!
    July 20th, 2010 at 05:24am
  • headintheclouds

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    Cole is such a sweetheart. love it.
    I hope James doesn't get his way.
    Loved it!! More soon please!! :)
    July 3rd, 2010 at 10:53pm
  • viva la roy;

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    Okay, freaking adorable. Totally in love with this story:) More soon?
    July 3rd, 2010 at 10:31pm
  • There She Goes.

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    I'm glad she's not letting James see the boys.
    Cole is so sweet to her. :D
    Update soon?
    July 3rd, 2010 at 09:16pm
  • squashedbychara

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    I owe you proper commets on this when I get home to my laptop. But for now I just wanna say I finished the few chapters that I missed while on my way to massachusetts (Im stealing my sister's iPod) but I just wanted to let you know I love the updates and it definitely entertained me in the car! Can't wait to read more
    July 3rd, 2010 at 04:53am