Not a Hero - Comments

  • ovechkinpwnz

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    Holy crap, that was honestly amazing. It was just, wow. You have amazing writing skills, and this story shows them. That was great.
    June 28th, 2010 at 06:39am
  • lolgina

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    That. Was. Amazing. My heart suddenly became an acrobat and won the Gold medal.
    Also, I agree with CaptainSerious up there.

    It was really great, there was no part that "sucked" at all.
    June 28th, 2010 at 06:35am
  • CaptainSerious

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    I think I just read one of the greatest short stories I have ever seen.

    That was fantastic, I honestly feel kind of shell-shocked right now that it's over. It was so good I'm running out of adjectives for it. It was truly amazing.
    June 28th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • MyrMyr

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    :O Don't you dare think it sucks.

    I loved your description of the game, best I've read anywhere by far. Maybe I'm just a sucker for details, but mehh, I'm sure I'm not the only one.

    And the end, perfect. Overall, I really, really liked it.
    If you wrote like that three years ago, no wonder your stories are more than awesome now! :D
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:11am