You better find yourself more freetime now MyrMyr, cause I can't wait to read the rest of it! Six chapters equals plenty of comments from my part. So here you go. Overall, I love that story! And I'm really happy to finally get to know a character who doesn't follow hockey either! Chapter Two mixed me up a bit, but maybe that's because I'm tired. Also, Winnipeg isn't in Alberta you idiot! But I forgive you. Actually, I didn't even realize. My favorite parts of your writing are the dialogues and the descriptions of how your characters feel and act. I love how your characters talk. I have a friend at school who always says "Long time no see!" and that just made me laugh. Anyways, I enjoy mucho your stories. Please finish that one! I'll be starting The Babysitter soon.
October 16th, 2010 at 11:26pm