Never Go Back - Comments

Im not very good at spelling words right and i didnt no that mibba had a spell check but thanx

In the third chapter/part, you switched from first person to third again. Everything else is well written besides some spelling mistakes. But otherwise, it's a good plot. :)

Well, as you can see, I am more of a short story one day project thing. I respect your respectful comments but I disagree. Thats just how I like to write my stories.

your story is good but people want more of a long chapter not just like one paragraph :\ hope that helps