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  • Coh!3

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    Im not very good at spelling words right and i didnt no that mibba had a spell check but thanx
    June 13th, 2010 at 05:30pm
  • LEG!T.

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    In the third chapter/part, you switched from first person to third again. Everything else is well written besides some spelling mistakes. But otherwise, it's a good plot. :)
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:54am
  • Coh!3

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    Well, as you can see, I am more of a short story one day project thing. I respect your respectful comments but I disagree. Thats just how I like to write my stories.
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:13am
  • Heart23

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    your story is good but people want more of a long chapter not just like one paragraph :\ hope that helps
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:07am
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