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  • life.ruiners

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    Holy crap, this story is freaking awesome! and confusing! but i'm way tooooooo interested in it to care that i'm confused. I'm super stoked for more!
    October 11th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • ZombieToast

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    Update plz!!!
    October 7th, 2011 at 08:30pm
  • Lady of Bats

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    This is really, really interesting. I love it. :)
    August 24th, 2011 at 08:46am
  • Mary.Jane

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    no, we need more than just two chapters. update, please!
    June 25th, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • lollipop102

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    Cant wait 4 the rest!!!
    June 25th, 2011 at 02:13am
  • xoKelsixo

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    This story has taken a huge twist! I'm really liking it!!! Really glad you updated!!! Again soon?
    June 23rd, 2011 at 02:45am
  • lollipop102

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    Uh-ohhh
    June 22nd, 2011 at 08:30pm
  • a w k w a r d

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    :3 This story. <3 It's a wonderful plot. I can't wait until you update.
    June 21st, 2011 at 07:11am
  • lollipop102

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    I love this story!!
    I hope u add more
    June 20th, 2011 at 07:07pm
  • xoKelsixo

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    Aww... Poor Coda. Please update soon!!! I wanna know why Coda's doing this to her. It wasn't her fault! lol Loving the intrigue!
    November 29th, 2010 at 08:29am
  • southpaw

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    I really really love the idea for this, and it's a super interesting story. I'm extremely curious as to what happens next... :D
    (I hope Coda doesn't really hate her, though. D:)
    November 23rd, 2010 at 01:47am
  • xoKelsixo

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    !!!!!!!! Argh!!! More please!!! Great chapter!!! Loving it!!
    November 13th, 2010 at 09:01am
  • Musika;

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    @kitsch:
    Haha. I'm sorry for the ellipses. It's a habit I've picked up. Sad
    Though thank you for you comment. Smile
    November 7th, 2010 at 01:43am
  • tigermilk

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    please update soon, this is really intriguing c:
    November 7th, 2010 at 01:06am
  • kitsch

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    Oh man.
    I shouldn't have read the fifth chapter while listening to a semi-sad song.
    It made me a little sad as a result. ): I wonder what she's going to find out about Coda next.
    The only real 'error' I saw was that there were one too many ellipses for my liking;
    but that's just my opinion. Other than that though, I didn't really find anything too
    distracting, just minor spelling errors. & of course, it was good that you updated. xD
    November 7th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • The Mega Napalm

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    This is amazing..
    YOu should update SOOn...
    Twist after twist....
    November 6th, 2010 at 04:05am
  • kitsch

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    (Sorry about the late comment; I've been busy. I read the fourth chapter
    awhile ago but I didn't have an opportunity to comment until now.
    & you're very welcome; you deserve more feedback. :] <3)

    The fourth chapter wasn't expected. Again. I'm really impressed by how
    imaginative Coda is with his directions on the Starburst wrappers.
    I am also stunned by how his character comes across in the clues he
    gives Allegra; he seems like someone who is hard to figure out.
    The last line of the chapter was cryptic. I am clueless as to what his "revenge" will be.
    By the way, I can totally picture this as a movie. Just a thought. c:
    August 27th, 2010 at 11:20am
  • xoKelsixo

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    Getting really good by the way! Loving it!!
    August 21st, 2010 at 12:30pm
  • xoKelsixo

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    Again... Asshole! Please update soon!!!
    August 21st, 2010 at 12:29pm
  • xoKelsixo

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    Oh my flip. What the hell??? He... He... He... Asshole. lol. Please update soon!!! I wanna know what happens next!
    August 6th, 2010 at 10:34am
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