I'll start off by saying that I've never read a hockey story before (even though I'm a big hockey fan like what), but I'm glad this is the first one I've read because it's really good! You're very descriptive with it and I'm able to picture all of the scenes vividly in my head.
I don't know when you last updated, because these comments are a bit old and in the reader's note for the last chapter you said you weren't sure whether to keep it or scrap it, but I hope you update it and don't scrap it because I thoroughly enjoy it!
wow i wonder who this mady character is, she seems strangely familiar to someone i know.....hmmmm well i loved the update and i'm excited to see what happens in his first game . keep it up :)
I'll start off by saying that I've never read a hockey story before (even though I'm a big hockey fan like what), but I'm glad this is the first one I've read because it's really good! You're very descriptive with it and I'm able to picture all of the scenes vividly in my head.
I don't know when you last updated, because these comments are a bit old and in the reader's note for the last chapter you said you weren't sure whether to keep it or scrap it, but I hope you update it and don't scrap it because I thoroughly enjoy it!