I Won't Say a Single Thing, Darling, That You Can't Believe - Comments

"Love and Affection" came on shuffle as soon as I started reading this earlier, and I thought it was so appropriate for this story. :D
I'm so ecstatic that Steve gets the girl. It's so wonderful.<3 I cried when I read it...but that's a good thing. Trust me!
I love love love love Steve. Reading about him makes me grin incredibly hard. Especially when they're YOUR Steve stories, because you portray him so perfectly! I do like this quite a lot. He's adorable. And so is this. And so are you. ADORABLE.

Judging has begun! The first thing I notice was that the title of the chapter was not properly capitalized. From the first line you used strong words and you used the words to paint a picture. Very nice. The grammar was a little off in terms of capitalization. Slightly clichéd and expected.

Sooooooo cuteee!!!!!
loveeee ittt!!!

POUR SOME SUGAR ON MEEEE.
I love this. It was really well written.
And like dinosaur said, there were a very inconsistancies, but otherwise great job.

That was so cute!
I imagined the guy having an Irish accent, just because he said "luv" a lot.
It was very well written, I just noticed a few words where there was a letter on the end missing like "ach" and "eve".
It was very good though. I liked it a lot.

Aaw I like this (:

^^
If you deserve a slap for this.
Then I deserve to get my ass beaten in for mine.
Not only did I write about them.
I kinda ripped not one band members.
But two of there hearts in to shreds.
I'm glad you started writing about them again though =D
I'm probably going to write at least another one, maybe two about them -_-
Thanks dude.
I'm actually really surprised that this only has a few other comments.
I loved it.
It was really awesome.
Like everything you write

SHHH! You’re not supposed to say who it’s about! Hence there’s nothing in the description thingy! I feel so dirty writing about them… like I deserve a good slap for it D:

NO COMMENTS?! WHY NOT?!
This was amazing. Truly awesome.
I cried at the end, actually. But they were happy tears.
This is spectacular. I'm glad you decided to start writing Def Leppard fics again, because I'd die without them.